This is gorgeous.

Take Care,
Erica.                                                        

Its sounds like you are going backwards and not forwards.

Sometimes you have to catch yourself, Not everyone is going to rescue you.

People plan their own down fall.

-PURESHEILD

wow- this is so great. I'm a writer too but this is just so emotional and descriptive!

I love it- welcome ot my faves!

Beautiful.

Take Care,
Erica.

You always stun me with your entries.
I hope everything is okay.
Huggles.

i like ur entry....

nice words...

have a good one

HUGS***

This is so pretty. You did a great job writing it.

Take Care,
Erica.

Absolutely beautiful.

Take Care,
Erica.

This is lovely hun...

Take Care,
Erica.

Beautiful...love the picture..hope you're doing OK.

Take Care,
Erica.

1. Your not ordinary, in any way or shape or form.
2. This is simply devastatingly beautiful.
3. Huggles.<3

I too am a writer but for the last few years I have found it hard to write. I want to get back into my poetry again. I've had a few published but you write so beautifully and I will be reading them all.

x

x

x

[Susans]

thats a great poem, I can imagine it being set to music, it's awesome.

don't take this the wrong way, but existance is spelt existence not exsistence and positive is spelt positive not possitive. Geez I hope I haven't upset you because that is one of the best poems I have read in ages and it honestly is awesome, publishable I reckon. awesome, love your work x x x

This is beautiful.........though let's hope it's ended.....as if, let's hope you've broken up with him. Abuse, I've seen it, and lived it.

Your poems remind me of how my heart used to be.....I'm adding you. I like the way you write.

Take Care,
Erica.

That entry was inspirational to me.

<3 Here for yaa

hmmm.. i guess smtimes its easiers 2 hold on 2 smtin dan 2 let it go!!

even i'm waitin 4 sm1...so i kw e feelin!! i hope  things wrk out 4 e best in dis relationship of urs...

tc n god bless ya:)

Oh how i can relate.
Lovely poem :)

I love it.

xox

I <3 it.

yourr arre an incrediblle
writterr.. youurrr veryy
tallentedd..
I meann geezz. :]]
i writee poemss tooo
but i dont think mine
arre thiis good.
welll keep upp thee
goodd work
darrlingg.

go commentt my
entryyss if youd like

           :]]

You want to be loved for better of worse.

You want a person who will tell you thinks that make you feel good.

You want a person who will take you forward in life.

Yes that the person you need for life.

Some one to look up to.

Good Luck !

-PURESHEILD

thats really good writing.  i wish i could write like that, but i wouldnt be able to to save my life.

a few years ago, i had an abusive boyfriend, and i too was blamed for everything.  you did this, you did that.  everything was MY fault, even if it had nothing to do with me.

my best friend at that time Tom had this brother, Mark and I stayed with Mark for like a month, I didnt go to school or anything, I stayed inside all the time until my (ex) boyfriend decided to leave me alone.

he is now in prison for attempted murder ...

i hope that your relationship gets better

Sounds like abuse.

Well mistakes have consequences.

_PURESHEILD 

I woke up with a shadow on my heart
All these misunderstandings tearing us apart
Your mind in confusion telling you how to feel
Your ability to break me and ability to heal

I love this line. It's perfection...

i wish i had the perfect compliement for your perfect writings :)

I love this poem. When I was younger I went through the same thing! As an older adult I don't care about fitting in. It's definately a freer way to live.

Aw that's so sad... )):  But really good writing..

Don't worry.. you don't wanna fit in with people like that. It looks good on the outside but it's really not what it seems. I hope you find friends who are more like you..and are decent nice people!

Don't let people make you feel bout who you are. Being different is hard..I know. But you'll be okay. Hang in there.. You are unique and just fine the way you are.  

Hope things get better!

Kat

Hey -

I read this. And I think it stinks when people copy from each other's diaries, especially without permission, or without giving credit to the original author. I don't write, so this has never happened to me, but I read a lot of diaries, and when you read the same thing in a few diaries, it makes it hard to determine the original author.

Ash

i definitely understand this. very well written!

:)

Wow thats amzing! So beautiful! Take care.

Ela xxx

woow, unbelievably beautiful writing in this. you hit every emotion truly at least to me. it made me feel those emotions!. very well done!

:)

It seems like you read my mind. Cool. I love this entry. Yeah, one ends up loving people like that.

what do you say when you see perfection?
--this entry is  p e r f e c t i o n

It takes alot to forgive someone for a mistake.
Be proud that you can do that.
Not all of us can.

=]]

Wow thats so beautiful, you are really talented! Take care.

Ela xxx

Yess
But you're way better.
This entry=amazing.
<3you.

your entry moved me very much

takecare

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I just realized the Alex and I
Always comment the same diarys.
[[PerpetuallySearching]]
Anywayy.
This is such a beautiful entry.
I love it [:
<3

Simply beautiful.
I <3 your lovely poem.
x|3

Oooooh that is really pretty.  Did you write that yourself?

Very lovely.

Thats such a lovely poem =)

***Lauren***

nice! good rhymin nd nice beat!

Shannon :)

 A Beautiful and powerful poem. The ending of it spoke deeply to me...I shall remember that! 

   I'm still at a place of trying to know the dreams that God would have me to dream...so I related deeply to this title.

    May you find your dreams!!!,

        Jewel

[Jeweliet]

very creative
I love your entries
ღ

Wow this poem define your own journal title,"BeautifulInside."  

I love it, will definitely put you in my favorite list.

good work keep it up

~keep fighting~

~G~

That is a beautiful entry about love, you are a good writer keep it up.

Have a nice day bye.

Nice poem. Thanks for the comment!

Nikki

i really liked it... u'r very talented, and yaa the best part is that U feel the SAME!

Love,

Diana.

You have an extraordinary talent for writing. This is just wonderful, it's very deep, you expressed yourself well in it. I like it.

Take Care,
Erica.

ahh this is so cute ur a really good poem writer

[underwoodlover]